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Someone made a thread here recently specifically for a poem they wrote. And, feeling particularly inspired lately by my own love for BDSM in a relationship, I decided to try my hand at it. I don't know how many people actually feel compelled to share their sexy time experiences in this form. But feel free, if I'm not the only one.

I said 'whatever else' because it doesn't really matter what kind of poems you post here, as long as they're some element of sexy.

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No one else could scar me
Like the one I love
Knowing my limits to push
When to hit, how hard to shove
Some say hate's the worst offender
I would easily disagree
When you care for the power-hungry
Your love feels to them like defeat
So you sit there on your knees
Opening yourself to their chaos
Brought on by their lack of control
In all the turmoil you cause
Grieving how much they feel for you
Beating you with whatever's near
And you take it, because you tell yourself
You deserve what you fear
You tell yourself you are scum
Needing to be dragged along
By someone much stronger than you
Judging if you've done right or wrong
At this moment, you lose yourself
Becoming their means of relief
All you need, and all you know
Is them allowing you to breath.
 

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See, this is so much more intelligent and respectable than that 50 Shades of Grey smut. @Taco Bella, you are quite the poet! Thank you for sharing that—I enjoy good poetry. :happy:
Thanks :) Not sure if I was fully able to convey what I was trying to say. But I hope it made some sense.
 

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I’m not into BDSM, but damn!... beautiful poem!
 
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