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Light Meditation

Cherry blossoms drift
on the wind, and I wonder
what to have for lunch.


Middleing Meditation

Cherry blossoms fall
on the ground. I stroll my path,
contemplating stuff.


Heavy Meditation

More cherry blossoms.
What the fuck is that about?
It's not even Spring.




Your turn. :happy:
 

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im crappy at poems and haiku's but here you go XD

 

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Freaking brilliant!! I'm serious, still giggling xxxxx
 

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^^ its what i do, heres two more



 
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How can you say you're crappy at this?! You're fantastic!

Haiku always makes me laugh anyway - something about the form *tickles* my brain. Prolly why I can never seem to write a serious one.


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Complimentary
men make me blush and exclaim,
OUCH!muthafucka.
 

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lol because those are just pics ive had sitting in my pictures folder, ive always hated poetry and art with a vengence, party because im not creative in that sense and partly because its just not my thing

i just like posting lolpics to make people smile ^^. But i do respect people who are creative enough to do it, perhaps a little jealous too XD
 

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Game
by Dalien
17 Mar 2011

Stirring night with dreams
There's no need to know your name
She already plays
 

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First haiku in a long time...i hope i did it right lol

Sun blooming
Lifeless tree's grim shadow unimpressed
Look at the bright side
 
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On Being Fruitful


Fireflies, flashing,
ensure immortality;
fornicate, and die.
 
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First haiku in a long time...i hope i did it right lol

Sun blooming
Lifeless tree's grim shadow unimpressed
Look at the bright side
Technically, it should be:

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

Preferrably, it's not one sentence chopped up in three parts, but three distinct lines where the third is a kind of poetic punchline.
 

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To write a Haiku
you count nineteen syllables.
(Nothing else counts much).


That's how I learned lol xx
 

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So it is

To write a Haiku
count seventeen syllables
(Nothing else counts much).

It's one the teacher taught us in - I think - ninth grade. Wasn't sure I was remembering it right, and obviously didn't count :)
 

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