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If only what she said were true
The blatant lies and malice
Sometimes I wish I could believe
Though they leave me alone and callous

If only she really had done as she said
'Barely touched me'
Sometimes I wish I could believe
Though it hurts more than one can see

If only I were wrong and knew
Melodramatic and torn with fear
Sometimes I wish I could believe
Though I cry tears painfully sincere

If only I could erase the bruises
Brush them away like dust
Sometimes I wish I could believe
Though I feel so torn from distrust
 

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Wow.. nice. : D
 

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While I'm generally not large on poetry, your shit's good! You have talent, I hope you're going into it.

I wonder how interested you are in experimental poetry? Without a structure or rhyme scheme (if I have my definition correct).
 
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